Causal Relation and Problem-Solution in Native and Non-Native Students’ Argumentation Essays based on the use of Problem

In Extract 2, the referent of problem, which forms the Problem segment, does not clearly state what is a problem, which is for one thing attributable to insufficient information, and also, to the bidirectional information. In one way the problem content is signaled by too enough and too much, but at the same time it expresses some positive aspect to the referred content, stating 'students aim an entrance examination'. The vague Problem segment is abruptly terminated by evaluative adjectives, and the following Response segment (signaled by solution, increase, judge) is also a sudden start of a new segment. Thus, problem in non-causal relation forms the discourse of [sudden termination of Problem to sudden Response].

This section has shown that instances of problem for th-be-N in US are all in causal relation and shift the discourse from [Situation to Problem]. In the JICLE corpus, except four cases, problem is mostly in noncausal relation, and forms an irregular Problem - Solution sequence, characterized by a break of the cohesive link in the discourse.

5.3 Problem Occurring for th-N

Problem for th-N has the following subtypes: 'th-N + verb', 'verb + th-N' and 'th-N in a phrase' (hereinafter th-N+v, v+th-N, In-Phrase-th-N, respectively), depending on the position of th-N in the clause. Problem occurring in different positions exhibits some position-specific features.

5.3.1 Problem for 'th-N + v'

For 'th-N+v', problem is almost always in causal relation (6 out of 7) in US, while many of the occurrences of problem in JICLE (9 out of 13) were in non-causal relation. Shown firstly is the list of instances of problem in the US corpus, below:

Concordances 4: Problem in causal and non-causal relation for th-N+v in US docile and backward in modern standards, the problem* still exists. From the very beginning the rand illusion of welfare reform. Rather, the problem can be solved only by providing more training in high school and college environment. This problem could easily be curtailed by lowering the drink respond to antibiotic treatment at all. This problem is compounded by the fact that not all illness but the administrators who allow them, the problem is not dealt with as it should be, but pushed interfere with living healthy. Of course this problem is not the model's fault, they are doing t

hey have nothing to stand on. The problem with discrimination in the workplace isn't always financial Of the cases of problem in causal relation, four of them are combined with implicit causative verbs (i.e., solve, curtail, compound, deal with), and the remaining two are with a be verb. Firstly concerning implicit causative verbs, they 'entail the meaning of make somebody/thing do something' (Fang & Kennedy, 1992: 65), as opposed to explicit causative verbs (e.g., create, cause, pose, present, become, result from) (Flowerdew, 2008: 58, 99). Implicit causative verbs are a device that can shift the discourse from Problem to Response (Flowerdew, 2008: 58, 100), as can be seen in the following example from Concordances 4:.

Extract 3:

Alcoholism is a growing problem in the United States today that affects all ages. Too many students fight alcoholism in high school and college environment. This problem could easily be curtailed by lowering the drinking age from twenty-one to eighteen. (US)

The referent of problem forms the Problem segment, and it is followed by a Response (signaled by curtail, lower). In this context, curtail is functioning as a two-way signal, shifting the discourse from [Problem to Response]. Noticeable is that curtail, as well as other implicit verbs in Concordances 4 often occur in the regular lexico-grammatical pattern of '(can) + passive verb + by-doing', and the Response (signaled by verbs) comes with a means of the response, or how the response can be realized (expressed by by-doing). Concerning the use of the two be verbs in Concordances 4, it has the meaning of explicit causative verbs and can be replaced by attributed to or stem from (e.g., this problem is not the model's fault). With the explicit causative meaning, the verb expresses clear cause-result relation in the clauses, but no shift of the discourse is perceived, and problem stays within the Problem segment. It may be that an explicit causative verb is not a two-way signal and simply expresses a cause-result relation between the clauses.

In contrast, in JICLE, there are some occurrences of problem for th-N+v that occur in causal relation, but problem seems not to be functioning to form a regular Problem-Solution sequence, as shown below:

Concordances 5: Problem in causal l relation for th-N+v in JICLE achers in English in elementary school. This problem is going to be solved. The Ministry of Education is former condition. Now the most difficult problem was solved! Many problems which should be solved at something like this can happen. Also this problem may make other new problems. Some people who all she had eaten. The doctor said that this problem didn't come from her physical problem but it came

One of the verbs, in the concordance line in Concordances 5, is an explicit causative verb, come from, and it simply expresses a cause-result relation between the clauses. The remaining three instances of problem are combined with implicit causative verbs (i.e., solve, make), but each of them forms a varied Problem-Solution sequence, which may be attributable to different forms of the verbs: future tense, past passive voice, and active voice. With future tense (is going to be solved), problem shifts the discourse from [Problem to Response], and how the problem is solved follows, similarly to the case in US. With past passive voice (was solved), the preceding segment of problem seems like a Response: problem terminates the [Response segment] as indicated with an exclamation mark (!); and the discourse shift to the next point is indicated by Now. With make, an implicit verb in active voice, problem shifts the discourse from [Problem to Problem]. This is how different forms of implicit verbs are affecting the Problem-Solution pattern.

Next is problem for th-N+v in JICLE that is in non-causal relation, as shown below:

Concordances 6: Problem in non-causal l relation for th-N+v in JICLE

traffic light is "green". Like this, the problem* of colors can provide us with a matter of science WWII ended, did it bring us happiness? The problem* still last now. Germany invaded Jewish person. o the highhanded attitude of settlers, the problem* consists in lack of correct information, They co on and study self-paced but everyday. Cost problem* is still remained, but more and more company or it and neglects people's will. Whenever the problem* happens between people and official organization om the people without permission. Could the problem* of land happen in Japan? In Japan, there are t bility that it might be a fraudulence. This problem* has often happened these days. Thirdly, indivis ter about computers. In car factories, the problem* is serious, I think. Industrial robots work ins imself. It should respect the privacy. The problem* of privacy was more complicated. It must respec

Problem is in non-causal relation combined with a stative verb or be verb. With stative verbs (e.g., consist, remain, happen), problem, referring to the Problem segment, shifts the discourse to a Response segment. However, the Response, signaled by stative verbs, does not express an active response, and the shift from [Problem to Response] is not clearly perceived. In the case of the be verb, it has the meaning of a stative verb and occurs with an evaluative adjective (i.e., serious, complicated). With the evaluative adjective being used by referring to the vaguely explained problem content, the Problem segment is abruptly terminated. Thus, in JICLE, problem for th-N+v in non-causal relation does not form the regular Problem-Solution sequence with either a stative verb or a be verb.

Following are the main findings about the use of problem for th-N+v in US and JICLE:

• In the US corpus, problem functioned to form a [Problem to Response] sequence, being combined with implicit verbs that often occurred in a regular lexicogrammatical pattern for the verbs. A be verb was also used in the meaning of an explicit causative verb, similar to such explicit causative verbs as attributed to or stem from, but problem that combined with a be verb of explicit causative meaning did not shift the Problem-Solution stages.

• In JICLE, some of the occurrences of problem were in causal relation combined with implicit verbs. However, maybe affected by varied forms of the verbs (tense, aspect), problem did not form the regular Problem-Solution. When involved in non-causal relation, problem combined with a stative verb to form a vague shift from [Problem to Response], and problem combined with a be verb brought the Problem to an abrupt termination, accounted for by an evaluative adjective that premodified problem.

5.3.2 Problem for v+th-N

The 'v+th-N' syntactic pattern occurs with the subject, but preferred subject types are different in JICLE and US. Shown below is the use of problem in US:

Concordances 7: Problem in causal (and non-causal relation) for in US obvious that Mr Gingrich does not understand the problem* of Welfare Reform at all. None of these rd of Trustees at USC should closely examined this problem*. The university requires that teacher's gather evidence, they will eliminate much of the problem with the credibility. \<ICLE US MRQ 0046> onlies??? Gallon size zip-lock bags, solve this problem. In these a person can fit a whole bottle e name of life. Symptom treatment exacerbates the problem by forcing more people into the medical ergency spending bill. This bill only stalls the problem. If the government does not pass the ank and the Great Depression began. This made the problem of homelessness become more numerous orance and inequality. It is not dealing with the problem, but ignoring it and in some ways ignitig,

Except for two occurrences, most of the instances of problem are in causal relation combined with a range of implicit verbs (e.g., eliminate, solve, exacerbate, stall). Meanwhile, the subject is an inanimate entity or demonstrative that is the theme, either promoted from the rheme in the preceding clause, or a repetition of the theme in the preceding clause (Eggins, 2004, 324), as shown below:

Ex. 1: In the future, if authorities obtain search warrants before they gather evidence, they will eliminate much of the problem with the credibility.

Ex. 2: This pact between the United States Congress and the President is just another name for an emergency spending bill. This bill only stalls the problem.

Ex. 3: Tying this to an already stereotyped black population is the cause of further ignorance and inequality. It is not dealing with the problem, but ignoring it.

When these examples are viewed in a larger text, the subject refers to the preceding segment, which is a Response, and problem terminates the Response by evaluating the response, with the evaluation expressed by the meaning of implicit verbs (e.g., eliminate, stalls, deal with). This means that problem is functioning to shift the discourse from [Response to Evaluation].

In JICLE, half of the instances of problem for v+th-N (nine out of 19) occurred in causal relation, with three types of subject: demonstrative, nominal phrase, and agents. Although in causal relation, problem with these subjects formed varied discourse patterns. Shown below is problem in causal relation with demonstrative and nominal phrases in JICLE (// means a paragraph break):

Concordances 8: Problem in causal relation for v+th-N with inanimate agent in JICLE etting a punishment. But this will not solve this problem. Of course it is very important but if w surroundings. To kill criminals don't solve the problem.// Death penalty can solve nothing. Crime //Finally, using own name as an alias does not solve the problem at all. In fact, one must change

With a demonstrative subject, problem seems to be functioning similarly to that in US. However, with the subjects made up of nominal phrases (To kill criminals, Using own name), which are newly mentioned in the discourse, or at least not mentioned in a short-distance preceding segment, their use causes a break of cohesion in the discourse. Besides, with the verb always in the negative, occurring in the sentence type of 'problem does not solve the problem', problem is functioning to shift the discourse in an abrupt way, either to summarize the discourse with a generalized statement (the concordance line), or start a new focus (the concordance line).

Next is when problem in causal relation occurs with an agent subject, as shown below in Concordances 9:

Concordances 9: Problem in causal relation for v+th-N with agent subject in JICLE ally, It is tme that the men cause these terrible problem for our own comfortability. But, it.

sion. The government office should set about this problem in no time. But smokers consideration is

Also the government should do something with this problem, as long as we take pride in being advanc

What can the Japanese Government do toward this problem? This is only my idea but I think it ot understand English. If we overcome this serious problem, we can get native speaker's thought. In

ll do the same thing if we don't try to solve the problem from the bottom. I think it is unreasonable

The use of problem refers back to the Problem segment and shifts it to a Response (signaled by implicit verbs, e.g., cause, set about, overcome). However, the agent subject, which falls on the Response segment, is a new element suddenly introduced into the discourse, and the shift from the Problem to the Response is abrupt. Also, the verbs, which are counted as implicit verbs, mostly comprise repetitions of the general verb do and also include a collocational error (set about), and this indicates a lack of vocabulary in the area of implicit verbs.

Next is problem in non-causal relation in JICLE, as shown below:

Concordances 10: Problem in non-causal relation for in JICLE it back to former condition. He bothered on this problem* for a long time. And one day, seeing his nese" As I couldn't speak Chinese, I told him the problem* in my bathroom by English. Because I use imitated earnestly. I notice such a fundamental problem* one by one, and the English writing while reaksuch situations? As we can't consider this problem* without private problem between man and er country. We have to think some more about this problem* because the situation is changing all t e to think about the other side's opinion and the problem*. The other side's opinion was this; teach pupils and students much more clearly about the problem* of gender discrimination and tell them lped us to look at the Ainu. We must look at the problem* of a minority people not only in Japan b ted, without considering. We have not to take the problem* as easy. After all, I think marriage, to have to pay much money. We should not leave this problem* as it is. Sex education's role is how t

The use of problem in Concordances 10 mostly occurs with agent subjects (e.g., I, we), and the verbs are non-causative, often mental verbs (e.g., bother, notice, think, consider) that describe what people think or feel (Biber, Johnsson, Leech, Conrad & Finegan, 1999: 371). Occurring in the sentence form of 'agent + mental verb + problem', problem often forms a narrative-like discourse, describing events on one topic occurring in a sequence from the viewpoint of the agent, as in the Extract below:

Extract 5:

Soon after the soup had fined, he thought of the idea that dried noodle would be durable. Though he realized that the noodle would be durable, it is very difficult to put it back to former condition. He bothered on this problem for a long time. And one day, seeing his wife frying tempura, suddenly an idea came to him;

Thus, with agent and mental verb, problem in non-causal relation for v+th-N forms a narrative-like discourse, not like Problem-Solution.

The following is a summary of the main findings about the use of problem for v+th-N in JICLE and US:

• In the US corpus, problem occurred with an inanimate subject, which was established following the rheme-theme pattern, and the verbs constituted a range of implicit verbs. In such cases, problem formed a regular discourse shift from [Problem to Response].

• In JICLE, half of the instances of problem were in causal relation, but the subject types were different from those in US. A subject type specific to JICLE was a nominal phrase that was abruptly used in the discourse. Accordingly, there was a break of the discourse, and problem suddenly terminated the discourse or started a new topic. The agent subject additionally occurred with problem in causal relation. It also formed a sudden introduction to the discourse, and problem shifted the Problem segment to Response, in an abrupt way. The remaining half of the occurrences of problem were in non-causal relation, and the subject was the agent. Problem then formed discourse like a narrative rather than Problem-Solution.

5.3.3 Problem for In-Phrase-th-N

For In-Phrase-th-N, the use of problem is similar in JICLE and US. Problem as a metadiscursive item occurred in similar frequency, with the normalized ratio of 2:4 (LL 0.62), and all of the occurrences were involved in causal relation, used in the adverbial phrase of 'to + infinitive + problem' in both corpora, as shown below:

Concordances 11: Problem in causal relation for In-Phrase-th-N in US ued. Our lawmakers have done little to solve this problem. ne Hundreds of frivolous lawsuits filed r agrees, . The only way to put an end to this problem is to institute mandatory drug testing of ressive gun control laws are needed to reduce the problem. However, legislative measures will work action must be taken immediately to alleviate the problem. People living without shelter has been a ng out of control and they show ways to curb this problem. The authors cite examples of how this pollution and companies that contributed to this problem. Rational Choice Theory urges .

Concordances 12: Problem in causal relation for In-Phrase-th-N in JICLE

to meet those goals. I have an idea to solve the problem. To support Japanese-Filipino children, the ns with parental affection in order to solve this problem. Now English is a international language. W need countermeasures against them to resolve the problem. Also, we must take care not to be infected we and Ainu work together to solve about the Ainu-problem. Today we often think about human right. Fo, elementary school, is a good way to solute this problem. The second reason is about the equality of In a larger context, problem functions to shift the discourse from [Problem to Response], where the Response is signaled by implicit verbs.

A clear difference in the two corpora, however, is in the range of implicit verbs. The US use a range of implicit verbs (e.g., alleviate, put an end to, reduce, curb), but in JICLE, implicit verbs are mostly repetitions of solve, and some are used incorrectly (e.g., solve about, solute).

5.4 Summary – Problem for Causal Relation and Problem-Solution in the Two Corpora

The study has shown that problem, functioning as a discourse marking shell noun, was almost always in causal relation, and helped construct the Problem-Solution pattern in the US corpus, mostly to connect [Problem to Response], and sometimes [Situation to Problem] or to conclude the Response. However, in the JICLE corpus, more than half of the occurrences of problem were in noncausal relation, and problem in noncausal relation formed discourse that can be barely perceived as, or is very different from, Problem-Solution. In addition, problem in causal relation often failed to form a regular, conventional Problem-Solution sequence, either. The features of the JICLE essays that negatively affected the construction of regular Problem-Solution patterns would seem to be accounted for by such factors as: a) types of verbs combined with problem, b) forms of implicit verbs, c) the subject type in the sentence, and d) the use of the be verb.

Regarding the types of verbs the high frequency of problem in noncausal relation in JICLE means that problem was often combined with stative verbs, and problem did not form conventional Problem-Solution stages. This pattern of the use of problem was well exhibited with th-N+v and v+th-N (see Appendix 1). Concerning th-N+v (problem + stative verb), a shift of the discourse from [Problem to Response] was not clear, as the Response segment was signaled by stative verbs (e.g., last, consist, remain). Concerning the v+th-N syntactic pattern (stative verb + problem), the verb in JICLE was often a mental verb (e.g., bother, notice, think), and problem constructed a narrative-like discourse.

Another factor that lead to irregular Problem-Solution in JICLE was the fact that although the students used implicit causative verbs, they occurred in random forms (e.g., voice, tense). This was shown for th-N+v, in particular. In US, the implicit verb that combined with problem regularly occurred in the passive form, or more specifically in such lexico-grammatical patterns for the verb as '(can) + passive verb + by-doing', and problem formed a regular shift of the discourse from [Problem to Response]. In JICLE, however, implicit verbs, actually repetition of solve, came in varied tense and voice forms, and the Problem-Solution pattern was in varied patterns. This seems to suggest a role of forms of causative verbs in constructing Problem-Solution, although the correlation between verb forms and the Problem-Solution pattern is not clear and needs more research.

The preferred type of subject also affected the sequence of Problem-Solution, as exhibited with problem in causal relation for v+th-N. In US, the subject was an inanimate entity, as the theme promoted from the rheme in the preceding clause, and problem connected the two clauses in causal relation and formed a conventional [Problem to Response] sequence. In JICLE, although in causal relation, the preferred subject was an agent (e.g., we, the government) and also a nominal phrase (e.g., to kill criminals) to a lesser degree. With a nominal phrase, it was newly introduced in the discourse, and problem suddenly terminated the discourse, or started a new topic. With an agent subject, too, it was also a sudden introduction to the discourse. Although problem shifted [Problem to Response], the shift to Response was abrupt and sudden.

Lastly, although only occurring in a small number of cases, the be verb was used with different meanings in the two corpora. In US, be verbs always had the semantics of explicit causative verbs, such as attributed to or stem from for th-N+v and become or pose for th-be-N; and problem often contributed to the conventional Problem-Solution sequence. However, in JICLE, be verbs were used in the stative meaning, and problem, mostly combined with an evaluative adjective, terminated the discourse, but in an abrupt manner, as exhibited for th-N+v (e.g., problem is serious), and for th-be-N (It is a problem). An abrupt discourse termination was a feature of the JICLE essays in the present study, and this was in part accounted for by the use of be verbs.

VI. PEDAGOGICAL IMPLICATIONS

Problem as a discourse marking shell noun in US was almost always in causal relation and formed a regular patterning of Problem-Solution sequence, while more than half the occurrences of problem in JICLE were in non-causal relation, resulting in deviated forms of Problem-Solution or other types of discourse patterns. This result seems, in one way, to indicate a parallel phenomenon to the finding about lexicalization patterns and discourse marking roles of nouns in NNS and NS students essays pointed to in past studies of the use of shell nouns (e.g., Caldwell, 2009; Hinkel, 2001; Tahara, 2020a). In NS essays, shell nouns can implicitly shift, or navigate, the discourse by sufficiently explaining the noun meanings, and this has a link to the present finding that nearly all of the instances of problem in US served to shift functional segments of Problem-Solution following the conventional sequence. Conversely, in NNS essays the meanings of shell nouns tended not to be sufficiently explained, and these nouns were superficial labels that shifted the discourse in an abrupt and sudden way, and this phenomenon may link to the present finding that many instances of problem in JICLE formed a random discourse pattern. In other words, the present study seems to indirectly suggest that efficient use of causal relation and Problem-Solution in US was related to sufficient lexicalization of problem.

Focusing specifically on causal relation and Problem-Solution in NNS essays, the present study showed that a proper use of causal relation is important for Problem-Solution, and for this purpose more teaching of implicit verbs to NNS students is indicated by the study. Despite the fact that implicit verbs can function as a two-way signal (Flowerdew, 2003, 2008), the JICLE students lacked this area of vocabulary. Commonly used implicit verbs should be taught, and the teaching could be conducted by incorporating forms of implicit verbs (e.g., tense, voice) and lexico-grammatical patterns (collocation, colligation, formulaic sequence) of the verbs, with th-N and th-be-N. The th-N pattern is reported to be a difficult pattern for NNS students to use (Aktas & Cortes, 2008; Nesi, 2012), and practicing verbs with these syntactic patterns would be particularly beneficial for the students. In addition to implicit verbs, proper establishment of the subject, such as one that follows the rheme-theme pattern, was also suggested by the study, and this should be taught in relation to the surrounding texts.

Another type of causative verbs, explicit causative verbs, may not need special attention in teaching. As the present study indicated, they did not occur very often in causal relation, and the NNS and the NS students used them in a similar way. However, regarding the use of be verbs in the semantics of explicit causative nouns, it should be explored more, particularly for researchers and teachers to understand the attribution of a causative meaning to the be verb.

VII. LIMITATIONS AND FURTHER STUDY

Inevitably, the present study has limitations. The two corpora were not large enough for generalization of the findings, and the lengths of the texts and essay topics were not comparable in the two corpora. These differences may have influenced the findings. It will be crucial for the findings to be tested with larger corpora to be either supported or negated. Also, the findings in the present study were about problem, and subsequent inquiries could be conducted with other problem-indicating nouns (e.g., obstacle, concern, drawback). Problem-Solution is an important text pattern in academic essays, and the present study has made it explicit that a proper use of causal relation can help to form Problem-Solution in a conventional sequence. In addition, some relation between lexicalization of shell nouns and formation of rhetorical patterns was suggested. The present study analyzed student essays in terms of the use of shell nouns, causal relation, and Problem-Solution. This line of the inquiry should be pursued further for the teaching of argumentation essays of an internationally acceptable level in EFL classes.

ACKNOWLEDGEMENT

This work is supported by a JSPS KAKENHI Grant Number 21K13001. I thank my PhD supervisor, Dr. Nicholas Groom, for his helpful advice on my thesis (2017), on which this article is based. I also thank anonymous reviewers for their useful comments on earlier drafts.

APPENDIX

Causative and non-causative verbs with problem for th-N and th-be-N in JICLE and US